When all seems hopeless
and the wind howls its lonely song
and the ocean, once a friend, burns white
each wave a muted sob, like broken plates
heard crashed through bedroom doors,
and the burnt blood brick of the sea wall moans
as if about to crack
Remember
this is nothing but a mad rush
and one day you will look back
on your tortured soul
as a parent does a child
all pink cheeks and trembling
lips, mourning
the astonishingly important loss
of a birthday balloon
to the clear blue sky.
Listening to Mad Rush by Philip Glass helped write this poem
Loved it 🖤
Thank you kindly
I loved this poem too, the last stanza especially.
Thanks Judy Kim!
You’re welcome, Luke
Lovely poem with an heart open and honest fluidity.
Thanks, I appreciate it
Reflection… is a double edged sword… all depends on time and place… where you are in the moment… really enjoyed this poem… cuts just right…
You’re right chewingonglass, thanks for your words
How dramatic and emotional you describe the ‘mad rush’, then turn
and look at the beauty that was :
” the astonishingly important loss
of a birthday balloon
to the clear blue sky.”
Miriam
Thanks Miriam for taking the time to contribute 🙂
This is a very helpful poem. Lots of perspective
Happy it resonated with you
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