You there swan-like, blonde, bowed
at the neck knelt
drawing in charcoal on the dusty garage floor
with great swathes of the arm
I, toddler, fingered the pebbles
in the exposed aggregate, enchanted, imagining
the stones, silken under thumb
to be precious jewels
I wonder
if even then your poor blue bruised heart
bubbled with strange gypsy superstitions –
featherstepped, forever a dancer,
eyes lit, alive, twinkling –
jewel-like themselves.
Quarter of a century later
disgruntled nurses inform you
the steroids are eating away your bones
and their appetite is insatiable.
It must be dense as diamond,
your resilience,
when packed into a such a small frame –
eyes lit, alive, twinkling –
burning against the darkness
like a campfire in a valley spotted
at the end of a tiresome journey,
signifying home.
Very beautiful poem for your mom❤️
What a way with words.r u published?
Very kind of you – yes, in a handful of small lit mags, I haven’t sent anything out in a few years though
Awesome! That sounds like a great milestone for any writer. Nicely done 😊
Beautiful. Thanks for sharing. You might enjoy — https://petersironwood.com/2020/05/02/mothers-day/
That was a very beautiful poem
A wonderful way to celebrate life!
Mother Nature and all living things.
Fitting to come so shortly after Easter, a celebration of death.
Even more fitting for the time of year, a season of fall for some, and spring for others 🤔
Thanks for sharing 😄