Skidding slightly slop on the floor!
HOT PAN FIRE IN THE ALLY
Put um out put um out fireman
Cutlery dropping crockery climbing water running hot never stopping level rising suds popping filled with grease greasy pans black hunks of soapy pig congealed cheese and egg and vinegar stinging eyes and nostrils clinging basin hands hot branded red then
FULL
Metal on metal scrub a dub dub in the tub here’s a waiter more plates NO!
Every god damn hungry blighter in Africa must be eating their supper through that hall!
The laughter roaring o sweet mockery I’ll kill em, I’ll kill em, CLANG
HOT PAN
FIRE IN THE ALLY
Stripe of sweat n muck from swiping flies hair out of eyes lids are tightly blinking blinded
Now here’s the head begins a-pounding no drinking chefs simply won’t allow it
Down down down down down gurgle and drain fingers digging gravely scrabbling fighting against swede and cabbage
Waiter comes in he says it’s done
The last of them are gone laughing on the street now can hear the smiles on the stairwell it’s deafening
Grab a drink kid
It wasn’t so bad after all
Unique, fun voice in this. Thanks for following me.
Sometimes it’s good to lighten the mood a little
Thank you for the follow-am following back. Great to read your work. I’m looking forward to reading more. “Drain fingers” and “hear the smiles,” YEAH!
I can totally relate to this one, I pulled some time in one of those kitchens, at one of those dishwashers. OMG. Have another drink for me. Lol.
You’re lucky those times are behind you dbp49, don’t mind if I do
I too was a dishwasher at a summer camp in college – damn the meatloaf pans.
Scrub scrub scrub scrub scrub scrub
I could really hear and see this – great stuff, and a very unique style. Enjoyed it, thanks for sharing, and for following me 🙂 H xxx
This is great, really evocative.
Thanks for following our blog. I hope you enjoy the stories of our journey, both inner and outer.
Cheers, Alison