I write streams
of journals about woe, about life.
I decide
what is worth sorrow,
I say to my sister–
come on, it’s late
get to bed–
I can’t help smiling
at her tear streaked cheeks
or at the unfairness of the world.
Mum’s sadness
is muddier, and it touches my inexperience.
I live somewhere
in between loud hot tears
and a spanked bum,
and sighs
that make their escape
through a smile
over the sink.
Nice!
I really love what you did here:
“I live somewhere in between
loud hot tears and a spanked bum,
and sighs.”
Solid ending lines, great imagery too.
Thank you tre. I love that you loved it.
You’re most welcome.
This evokes beautifully. It seems infused with a tragic air, for me; but more so for its attachment to the astonishingly described mundane. You make the ordinary extra-ordinary – and in that heightened ordinariness, we find the special.
Thanks for the analysis Mils, that was almost a poem itself
🙂
Honestly heartwarming
Not in a oh how cute kinda way but like hard hitting the struggle is real kinda way
Thanks for the comment and thanks for the clarification and thanks for the chuckle
😊👌 for a chuckle… Anytime
Interesting poem.
This is incredible.
Thanks Jessie