As the years drain away from all of us, poems too pass into the past. Sometimes you just have to grab them by the scruff of the neck and drag them back into the limelight. Welcome to my weekly bit, ‘Old Poems Die Hard’ – reblogging a forgotten poem. ‘Dancefloor Justin’ was originally published 29/08/2014.
Dancefloor Justin
Dancefloor Justin learned to dance down a narrow ally,
he took professional dancing lessons by oil lamp
in a place where bins overflow and bastard cats wail.
I eyed up his moves with a Ceaser’s thumb
against the bar feeling wild
and high enough – tomato juice warm against the straw,
bruised purple in the bar’s mirror. O
Dancefloor Justin who was evicted by his black mistress,
Dancefloor Justin who was concerned with his eye wrinkles,
Dancefloor Justin who fell on deaf ears
and later,
the floor.
LOVELY ❤
Thank you ruchitaa!
Hi, Luke, I am new to your site and have just read about six of your poems and Prose Fiction to get to know you a bit more. I certainly like your style and enjoyed each and every piece I read. I am looking forward to going back into your archives for more. Please excuse me for not commenting on each and everyone but the comments would all be the same … great work and will enjoy following this blog.
Hey randomrose, I really appreciate you taking the time to browse some of my content. Of course I don’t expect comments from anyone! Any comment is a bonus 🙂 Thank you for your kind words, I look forward to having you around the place.
Hi, Luke! Nice poem! Glad it saw the light of day (never mind poor dancefloorJustin…)
Was just wondering, could you tell me if you have more than or less than 1000 WordPress followers?
Hey Randy, thanks for reaching out. As of today I have 2,405 wordpress followers 🙂
Hi, Luke! I already nominated you for the Liebster Award. You can read about it, here: https://newsnotes1.wordpress.com/2016/07/25/the-liebster-award-2/ Your wonderful drawings, and your concerns about the difficult issues in life, which you confront in words, show your fearless and fearsome wonder about the world! Thanks!
Hey Randy, Wow, thank you so much! I look forward to reading more 🙂
Wonderful. Your subscribers put you over, but I didn’t know, and I still think you deserve it. Thanks for your thoughtfulness.
Very nice 🙂
As always your works are amazing.
Thank you so much