Machines lift
your hulking mass
weightless, O
wingless angel
slit
you give
and give
and give.
You are
a huge and creaking
oaken tank
of red grape wine
burst and split,
like the monstrous hull
of an abandoned ship,
and I just hate
how easy it all is
to watch you stagger
comically down the truck’s ramp
like a father drunk,
your shoulders crying
out for a friendly arm,
and the way you look
up at me
in our final moments
with the unsuspecting eyes
of a faithful partner –
O, if only
it was enough
to weep.
I love this!! Even though it makes me ponder the poor soul’s tragic final moments before she becomes a ‘product’.
Thanks very much Sharon
I have read this over and over. You are a brilliant writer, Snotley.
What a lovely surprise 😀