And here’s my old shirt, blue
and green with busted holes
two, three, no, four
buttons blown away –
bounced off backdoors
of barrooms or pool halls,
glittered down towards gutters
always bubbling full of rain
and clogged full of leaves
slick and shiny
as the backs of roaches
sleeves unroll hardly halfway
down the arm, hand and same
skinny boy wrist left
choirboy nekked and exposed
which any fool could snap
with a sneer or a cold look
all the old boys
hung up there, handed down
sometimes even twice before
same washed out colours
dangle off lopey goofball I –
friends seen, when was it last, a year, two?
it’s me, same old me,
same old beat shirt, blessed be
the frayed edges, floating in
like a character off a cancelled show
or a kept receipt whose ink
has long rubbed clean.
great
Thank you kindly
Great word play – has a really strong identity which a lot of writing, no matter how technically well written it is, hasn’t got.
Likes this 🙂
I think that’s the nicest thing anyone’s ever said to me James, thank you
would you say that the writing is still there but it’s been rubbed away, or would you say the writing is just gone? do you miss the buttons, or do you appreciate the loss? there is a curious longing for absence, i’m feeling, but also an appreciation of that same absence.
you really hooked me with the receipts. my pockets and life are littered with them.
I knew after reading your essay you’d be nothing but trouble 😄 the writing is gone. I’ve always thought there’s something poignant about things people squirrel away to safety being uprooted/destroyed by causes bigger than ourselves. Reminds me of the animal I am
The receipt line, nice touch.
Cheers David
Love your words – Thank you also for your ‘Follow’ of my Blog 😀
“choirboy nekked and exposed” glad you make and share.
Thank you!