She took her things
that lined the shelves, they left
holes in the dust
like buckshot
in a stag’s flank.
These shapes
and their brazen absence
would have killed
me if I were you, and it’s funny
six months ago it was, and yet already
it’s as if it happened to someone else,
like when you hear about an old
school friend t-boned
by a drunk
driver and their brains
now play spaghetti-hoops
on what’s left
of the interior.
I grab a cloth and move to banish
but am stricken
suddenly with thought of being caught
on my knees
wiping away
what for you could be the last
of something sweet –
I have known since the playground
my mind doesn’t idle
the same speed as other engines,
so I put the cloth away
and tiptoe around your flat,
wishing to be nothing
more than a friendly phantom
with sheepish smile
and open ear.
Immersive. Shared it here..
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/21/buckshot-luke-otley-my-troubled-mind/
just wanted you to know. Cheers!
Cool piece Luke👍Enjoyed it👏✌️
My best friend met his end in a similar way on a midsummer day in 79. He was 21 and had more life in him than I will ever have. I still feel guilty now at having outlived him for so long. Odd, isn’t it?